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JBKlyde 02-18-2012 05:26 PM

He Who Loves Lives
 
I'm just guy,
Looking at the sky,
I don't want to die,
I want to Live Live Live,
When I cry no one cares,
Cause there not aware,
That this love,
Is more than a flare,
It's a Fire in my heart,
No I'm not very smart,
So I write it off as art,
It's just a sweet tart,
I have no one to love,
And no one love's me,
Still I laugh because,
I'm full of gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,

yftp

ZenGum 02-18-2012 06:52 PM

Minor point: there is no need for an apostrophe with "loves" if you are using it as a verb.

She loves me. (verb)
I have three loves. (plural)
My true love and my love's friend. (possessive)
My two loves and my loves' friends. (plural possessive)
My love's lonely. (contraction, my love is)


KTHNXBAI

JBKlyde 02-18-2012 07:04 PM

Plus 10 trust point's.

sexobon 02-18-2012 08:08 PM

Counterpoint
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JBKlyde (Post 796369)
He Who Loves Lives

John 15:13 - Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.

ZenGum 02-18-2012 09:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JBKlyde (Post 796389)
Plus 10 trust point's.

:lol: are you trying to give me an aneurism?

Sundae 02-19-2012 07:31 AM

She Who Only Loved A Cat

Half lived.
A life many would be grateful for
Wasted amongst the litter of dreams.
And even fresh water lapped
Has the sound of tears
When it is not milk to sustain children.

There is never time in this life
To stop and regret our choices,
Until after we have made them
And love is nothing more than
Cat hair on the pillow.

monster 02-19-2012 09:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sexobon (Post 796398)
John 15:13 - Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his grammar for his friends.

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JBKlyde 02-19-2012 02:13 PM

You Know what else yftp could stand for Y-File-Transfer-Protocol<- that's actually what FTP stands for... Interesting Fact I Learned in College. And really my family loves me so it's not that bad.. but this was my v-day poem to the internet.. abd plus Jesus loves me too.. I'm just being dramatic...


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