Piss ass bastard fucking computer!!! Just wrote a long response with quotes and everything but I've timed out, or something. Bastard!
Sorry, deep breath.
Bascially I was saying thanks for all the advice, can't be bothered to re-write the article but will bear the points in mind for the future.
By drawing a parallel with my own teenage insolence I was hoping to make the point that despite the religious tone she is still a 16 year old girl who has entered an institution and doesn't want to follow the rules. You don't go to India and complain about cows walking in the road. If you don't like it, don't go to India. (I went to a school that didn't require uniform for a while). It's just with all the walking on eggshells regarding Islam at the moment we don't need some hormone ridden religiously intoxicated young girl adding fire to fire.
But I do need to break the 10-second barrier and get a decent kick - the point is there somewhere but yes the story is too personalised to break through. Thanks people.
