Thread: A poem...
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Old 05-30-2005, 08:04 PM   #52
Sun_Sparkz
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Lady Sidhe - I would like to comment on your poem, i really like the forst few verses.. they were well constructed and very emotional.. however in the last few - it seemed to get very, clouded? less constructed.. its like two different peoms the top one, and the bottom one. Toward the end i lost interest in the poem - whereas at the start - i was very drawn into your emotion.

Good vibes and well wishes go out to both you and TS - i hope that you will one day be able to look back at your time together and smile because of all the good times - yet at the same time look forward to your long and individually progressing lives. Your both smart, funny, caring and open minded people - when one door closes, and the fire inside the house is singing your back hairs.. Jump out the window There is a beautiful garden outside!!

After observing the "goings on" in this thread i find it strange that others like SV, Bri, and Catwoman can start similar threads on their relationships and get completely different responses than you have - Perhaps i just dont spend enough time in here to understand why that may be. But i thought it was quite perculiar..
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