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Old 09-08-2005, 01:47 AM   #9
NICOTINEGUN
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Your poetry is both profound and philosophical. It motivates one to become a better and more productive person in society. "Just do." It reminds of Socrates and other greek philosophers with it's simplicity but effectiveness. However, I don't think it speaks to me on the level that your earlier work "Gene, Gene" does:

Gene, Gene had a machine
Joe, Joe could make it go
Art, Art blew a fart,
blew the whole thing apart.
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