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Old 10-21-2005, 11:45 PM   #5
dar512
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The essay per se is fine. The formatting could be improved. Spaces between paragraphs etc. The writing flows well and hangs together. But more importantly, for assignments anyway, does this work fit the requirements of the assignment?
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