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Old 06-07-2006, 11:14 AM   #1
Ibby
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Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: "the high up north"
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More songs I wrote, please crit?

You, Robot?


A million small points of light
Flickering in the dark
Dependant on our tiny machines
Electric overload

Sci-fi is fiction no more
Machines, they rule our lives
Computers in charge of all
Our towns are run like hives

Has mankind grown too lazy?
Are people just too weak?
Machines tell us what to do
What to eat, what to think

What once took weeks, a moment
What took a year, an hour
Our lives have sped up too much
Why can’t we mellow out?

Outro solo (Keys? Techno-prog-y vibe, think APP’s I Robot)
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