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DanaC · 06-13-2006, 06:23 PM

I am thinking I need to either remove or rewite verse 5. I don't like the way it scans. Last verse I am not sure about either heh

06-13-2006, 06:23 PM	#2
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	I am thinking I need to either remove or rewite verse 5. I don't like the way it scans. Last verse I am not sure about either heh