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Was that how you used to look,
So long ago? I didn’t know
this was the way it would go.
In the end, is this the way it all goes?
Echoes of a face I never knew.
First line you question was that how you looked, last line should reflect the not knowing.
Just an idea. A really beautiful and touching poem.
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