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Old 06-04-2007, 08:12 PM   #14
tw
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Originally Posted by Ibram View Post
And tw, you DO have a point about the opening... But keep in mind that I did write this for school, and therefore needed a 'hook' like they tell us to write.
That was the word I was looking for. Yes, you need a hook. But different hooks for different fish - was my point.
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