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Very nice reading your poem, is the blood "pretty"? There are a few tiny tears as well, that is a very nice poem and in the sense of a loss the reader can only feel in comparison to the reality, if it never had been written at all (while reading).
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"There never seems to be enough time to do things you wanna' do once you find them."-excerpt from Jim Croce's 'Time in a Bottle'.
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