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Old 02-04-2008, 01:26 PM   #6
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Why does it say 18-1? I thought the score was 17 -14?

btw, Fresh, nice verbiage, but your sentences are way too long. You're well on your way to decent sports reporting, though. Just watch for missing/extra words caused by changing your approach to the point you want to make -very easily done in long sentences. E.g. "the hyped up but failure of the New York Yankees" -this doesn't make sense, although I think I know what you were trying to say, which is half the battle.
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