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Old 06-23-2008, 03:01 PM   #7
Imigo Jones
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Tennyson's "The Brook"

tombstone, I have looked up "The Brook" and sung it to "Yankee Doodle"! It does work, especially if you don't try to jam a verse of the poem to the song's chorus. I mean you have to cram syllables together. The syllables all fit almost perfectly to the melody and rhythm of the song's basic verse, not so perfectly to the chorus--although it's doable.

In terms of the poem's overall structure, there are 13 verses, and every 3rd or 4th verse, there is that repeated theme:
[Something something la la la]
To join the brimming river,
For men may come and men may go,
But I go on forever.


So, you could consider this the chorus of "The Brook," but you aren't singing it every other verse. With the chorus of "Yankee Doodle," you are ("A" = verse, "B" = chorus with different melody):
AB AB AB AB . . .

Here's the overall structure of "The Brook," where
"A" represents a 4-line verse with new imagery, and
"B" is a 4-line verse that always has that same theme on lines 2-4
(and again, "B" really has the same "melody" as "A"):
AAB AAB AAB AAAB
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