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I've never been any good at cold reading.
I'd like to see this read through (youtube?)
How long is it supposed to last? I assume it's a short piece?
It's a fun premise, and I like the sparsity of the lines and the fact it's a simple two-hander.
I'm not sure if it builds enough though.
The audience know something that Rich does very early on, which cues them for the denouement.
Just a thought.
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