Thread: Ode To A Road
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Old 08-30-2008, 04:40 PM   #4
Trilby
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I love it. Do you have any local poetry contests you can enter into? It's a goal of mine to give it a try this Feb. in our local newspaper. I think you should be showing this stuff to someone who knows from poetry. I think it's very, very good, but I'm a wannabe.
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic.

"Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her.
—James Barrie


Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum
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