[monster]

SG, your make-up looks very pretty and incredibly neatly applied, but if you're going for goth, as a former make-up-wearing goth type, please don't be offended when I say I can hardly see any eye make-up there.

you need waaaay more eyeshadow. and more liner. still neatly applied, though -racoon eyes is not sexy. you need that darker shadow almost all the way up to the eyebrows (which should be blackened a little more), then blended with the lighter, more sparly stuff. You should extend the black eyeliner out horizontally until it's below the end of the eyebrow, put a little of the darker shadow above it and blend then a little, then the lighter color above that, up to they eyebrows blending with the darker as you go.

To go further, you can dust a thin line of the dark shadow underneath the eyeliner on your lower lid, and then a little of the lighter sparkly beneath that.