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Old 08-18-2010, 03:48 AM   #12
DanaC
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There are still odd bits in that which might irritate you. Don't kow if the American characters will jar. But it's a decent plot, and genuinely quite chilling in a few places.

Nuclear Time, was interesting in some ways but I think it was trying to be too clever. All that backwards conversing is a neat idea, but broke me out of the story. The plot seems a bit too convoluted. Don't know, just one of those that feels like it should have worked, but hasn't.
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