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Old 03-09-2004, 11:38 PM   #5
lumberjim
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Join Date: Oct 2003
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"have you ever heard the word 'hoarfrost'?" official result: 27,932,882.33.
those would be the "yes" answers. I see that you are well versed in the sarcastis ways. But there is something you do not know....."I am noh leff handed!.... And, I ahavva study my grippa. "

That, and my dog ate the link to those statistics. It was the only link there, too. sorry.

I read that poem this morning, and I like it. I think I liked the literal, choppy translation better, though. It was more metaphoric, and direct. In our poetry, ryhmes are optional, but effective. Imagery is more powerful still.
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