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Old 04-01-2013, 09:26 AM   #5
DanaC
We have to go back, Kate!
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Yorkshire
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I like it. I don't necessarily understand it...but there are some killer lines in there.

Quote:
The clouds came,
Without warning,
Just as Life is greater than evil,
The dust and ashes will,
Remind the people,
That a lie is only prequel,
To the destruction of a leathal,
Exposure caught in the middle,
Of regret and sin,

That's really clever.
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