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Radar:
I own all of you
because I'm the champion
of making Haiku
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hot_pastrami:
Technically, a haiku's lines should all be stand-alone... a phrase should not span lines. I don't always follow the rules myself, however.
Improperly formatted Haiku.
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the champion, huh?
would you mind sharing a real one with us, then?
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This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality
Embrace this moment, remember
We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan
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