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Old 09-28-2017, 03:00 PM   #1
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Let's Write A Poem

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The Elephant And His Dog
by The Cellar

An elephant and his dog
In a river, on a log



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Old 09-28-2017, 06:14 PM   #2
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Heehee, I came here with a similar idea because it's National Poetry Day in the UK

Yours is more well formed, though. (as the actress said to the bishop)

An elephant and his dog
In a river, on a log
Passed a gator with a tater
firmly clamped in sharp-toothed gob
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Old 09-28-2017, 10:49 PM   #3
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An elephant and his dog
In a river, on a log
Passed a gator with a tater
firmly clamped in sharp-toothed gob
"Baked, or fried? Tots au gratin?
Fairly earned, or gains ill-gotten?"
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Old 09-29-2017, 01:06 PM   #4
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An elephant and his dog
In a river, on a log
Passed a gator with a tater
firmly clamped in sharp-toothed gob
"Baked, or fried? Tots au gratin?
Fairly earned, or gains ill-gotten?"
While lifting his leg to take whiz,
The dog wonders where Dana is.
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