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Old 12-05-2011, 08:31 PM   #1
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Haiku Too

ones you wrote.

I wrote this for my swimmer girl who is happy and yet hurting from being back in the water after two weeks off....

A kite without air
Is pretty but meaningless.
Mermaids need water.
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Old 12-06-2011, 06:24 AM   #2
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Beautiful!You have a knack for this.
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Old 12-06-2011, 07:28 AM   #3
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That's actually pretty good, monster.

Leaves in the forest.
Thank God, they're not on my lawn.
Think I'll have a beer.

I don't really have the knack.
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Old 12-06-2011, 07:32 AM   #4
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She said "get the knack"
Sharona, so damn pushy
So 1980.
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Old 12-06-2011, 07:33 AM   #5
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Anything about beer works for me!
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Old 12-08-2011, 02:33 PM   #6
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Old 12-08-2011, 02:36 PM   #7
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You should throw a few carriage returns in there at the end to distance your cooking blog from the image in my head.


Sorry for all the vomiting.
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Old 12-08-2011, 09:19 PM   #8
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An upshot snuck in there and upfucked your haiku about upchucking!
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Old 12-09-2011, 01:18 AM   #9
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How much up would an upfuck chuck, if an upfuck could chuck up?
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Old 04-14-2016, 08:10 PM   #10
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Old 04-15-2016, 07:58 AM   #11
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nice
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Old 04-15-2016, 09:18 AM   #12
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