Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 4

JuancoRocks · 08-14-2007, 12:10 AM

i am waiting
there is no time
there are many who write
there are some who rhyme
there is a presence
feeling about
i know not what i am sure of
i only know there is doubt
sometimes in the morning
when the earth smells so sweet
so little time for reflection
must get out on the street
to the place of employment
do what has to be done
always feeling the pressure
always under the gun
can't wait to leave in the evening
hating the slugs up ahead
finally at home in your castle
feeling the warmth of your bed
repeating the same thing each morning
doing the same thing each night
ask why the cycle keeps repeating
saying i don't know it just seems right

DanaC · 08-14-2007, 06:24 AM

wow. that's really good.

Sun_Sparkz · 08-14-2007, 07:26 AM

i cant even sit here in my room and type into a quick reply
a simple, sweet spontanious lullaby
youve sucked it all right out of my limbs
the are limp with dissapointment.

i thought that rhonda burne was right
that if i gave thanks for you every night
you'd appear on the scenes
stepping out of my dreams
but the universe must have forgotten my address.

freshnesschronic · 08-15-2007, 08:20 AM

just one hour of the day
with you
is what i need to stay line
in this world, oh girl
cause you're the only one i need
one hour is all i really need
say you will stay with me forever
tonite
cause i love you
my feelings are true
can't you see
that we were meant to be

Flint · 08-17-2007, 09:59 AM

im a dipstick shitlick
look at me LOOK AT ME
look away i make you sick

im a dumptruck assfuck
hate me hater HATE ME
pity me for my bad luck

your the WORSTest im the BESTest
say my name my name is _________

Jeboduuza · 08-17-2007, 12:06 PM

given the circumstances
the only way in
is out
given the circumstances
the only way to hold on
is to let go
given the circumstances
the only way to have it all
is to give everything

BigV · 08-17-2007, 04:26 PM

J--

Would you mind turning down your signature about seven or eight notches?

TIA

Yours,

DanaC · 08-17-2007, 05:34 PM

Can I second that request? It's your right of course to have what you like there, but it's a little like getting shouted at every time your post comes up. It kind of detracts from your posts a little imo.

Oh btw, LOL Flint.

Flint · 09-04-2007, 03:42 PM

the fat lady sings
the fat lady flings
poo in your face
a shoe in the space
that you call your anus
this thread is heinous
if we hacked you to pieces
nobody would blame us

__________________

...it was in response to a thread that irritated me.

Flint · 09-04-2007, 04:09 PM

You may ask, why are my poems so mean-spirited? Let's say, for the sake of argument, that one of the moderators actually moderated around here a little (fat chance) and :::flips a coin::: Bruce called me out. I'd say:

ding-dong dildo my name is Bruce
and I know the truth, but I wasted my youth
on bible-thumping and goat-ass humping
I spend my days conclusion-jumping

skysidhe · 09-04-2007, 07:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flint

Let's say, for the sake of argument, that one of the moderators actually moderated around here a little (fat chance) and :::flips a coin:::

Curious. What would you have him moderate more of?

Flunt · 09-04-2007, 08:15 PM

your butt?

skysidhe · 09-04-2007, 11:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by skysidhe

Curious. What would you have him moderate more of?

ok I'll answer for you.

How about bad poem writers attacking others. Stupid thread writers attacking others and dumb clones with even dumber answers and people who just can't seem to grow up.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flunt

your butt?

dumb

lumberjim · 09-05-2007, 12:13 AM

i knew you'd get all bent about that. I was gonna say 'your face' but i thought that was a little too harsh. i figured if i said 'your butt' that you might get the joke and laugh with me. (ps...I'm Flunt)

ease up, cookie.

here's a poem about taking the heat:

roses are red, violets are blue
take a joke, you crazy slut.

skysidhe · 09-05-2007, 12:19 AM

[quote=lumberjim;381875]i knew you'd get all bent about that. I was gonna say 'your face' but i thought that was a little too harsh. i figured if i said 'your butt' that you might get the joke and laugh with me. (ps...I'm Flunt)

oh I knew who flunt is and all your other names. I know your M.O and your car saleman tactics.

take your alter egos and shove them up your ass please

you are fucked up in the head

you project your obssessions and irrational fears

I am sick of you and people who think like you. Liers and freaks.

08-14-2007, 12:10 AM	#46
JuancoRocks Sir Post-A-Lot Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Paradise Valley, Arizona Posts: 437	i am waiting there is no time there are many who write there are some who rhyme there is a presence feeling about i know not what i am sure of i only know there is doubt sometimes in the morning when the earth smells so sweet so little time for reflection must get out on the street to the place of employment do what has to be done always feeling the pressure always under the gun can't wait to leave in the evening hating the slugs up ahead finally at home in your castle feeling the warmth of your bed repeating the same thing each morning doing the same thing each night ask why the cycle keeps repeating saying i don't know it just seems right Last edited by JuancoRocks; 08-14-2007 at 01:27 AM.

08-14-2007, 07:26 AM	#48
Sun_Sparkz Has Body Temperature Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: I come from a land downunder Posts: 1,105	i cant even sit here in my room and type into a quick reply a simple, sweet spontanious lullaby youve sucked it all right out of my limbs the are limp with dissapointment. i thought that rhonda burne was right that if i gave thanks for you every night you'd appear on the scenes stepping out of my dreams but the universe must have forgotten my address. __________________ We'll never be as young as we are right now

08-17-2007, 09:59 AM	#50
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	im a dipstick shitlick look at me LOOK AT ME look away i make you sick im a dumptruck assfuck hate me hater HATE ME pity me for my bad luck your the WORSTest im the BESTest say my name my name is _________ __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

08-17-2007, 12:06 PM	#51
Jeboduuza Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: de_dust Posts: 141	given the circumstances the only way in is out given the circumstances the only way to hold on is to let go given the circumstances the only way to have it all is to give everything __________________ I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it. -Voltaire

08-17-2007, 04:26 PM	#52
BigV Goon Squad Leader Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Seattle Posts: 27,063	J-- Would you mind turning down your signature about seven or eight notches? TIA Yours, __________________ Be Just and Fear Not.

08-14-2007, 06:24 AM	#47
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	wow. that's really good.

08-15-2007, 08:20 AM	#49
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	just one hour of the day with you is what i need to stay line in this world, oh girl cause you're the only one i need one hour is all i really need say you will stay with me forever tonite cause i love you my feelings are true can't you see that we were meant to be

08-17-2007, 05:34 PM	#53
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	Can I second that request? It's your right of course to have what you like there, but it's a little like getting shouted at every time your post comes up. It kind of detracts from your posts a little imo. Oh btw, LOL Flint.

09-04-2007, 03:42 PM	#54
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	I just posted this on AG the fat lady sings the fat lady flings poo in your face a shoe in the space that you call your anus this thread is heinous if we hacked you to pieces nobody would blame us __________________ ...it was in response to a thread that irritated me. __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

09-04-2007, 04:09 PM	#55
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	this is fun You may ask, why are my poems so mean-spirited? Let's say, for the sake of argument, that one of the moderators actually moderated around here a little (fat chance) and :::flips a coin::: Bruce called me out. I'd say: ding-dong dildo my name is Bruce and I know the truth, but I wasted my youth on bible-thumping and goat-ass humping I spend my days conclusion-jumping __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

09-04-2007, 08:15 PM	#57
Flunt \|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\| Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 16	your butt? __________________ "Drumming was the only thing I was ever good at." -John Bonham

09-05-2007, 12:13 AM	#59
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	i knew you'd get all bent about that. I was gonna say 'your face' but i thought that was a little too harsh. i figured if i said 'your butt' that you might get the joke and laugh with me. (ps...I'm Flunt) ease up, cookie. here's a poem about taking the heat: roses are red, violets are blue take a joke, you crazy slut. __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

09-05-2007, 12:19 AM	#60
skysidhe ~~Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.~~ Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,828	[quote=lumberjim;381875]i knew you'd get all bent about that. I was gonna say 'your face' but i thought that was a little too harsh. i figured if i said 'your butt' that you might get the joke and laugh with me. (ps...I'm Flunt) oh I knew who flunt is and all your other names. I know your M.O and your car saleman tactics. take your alter egos and shove them up your ass please you are fucked up in the head you project your obssessions and irrational fears I am sick of you and people who think like you. Liers and freaks. Last edited by skysidhe; 09-05-2007 at 12:28 AM. Reason: forgot to quote the assoramus

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