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Urbane Guerrilla 09-05-2007 01:10 AM

The Savage and the Allegedly Savage
 
I think Spexx just said LJ gave it a real beating. You do that to egg whites, they get all white and foamy. :neutral:

lumberjim 09-05-2007 01:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flint (Post 381622)
Less is more. The first sentence was powerful. The additional text only diluted it, leaving it spread thin, and ineffective. :2cents:


dude. there is NO point in instructing the over-dramatic on the finer points of humor. You sit at the cool table. spexx doesn't. that is the source AND the result of his tragic persona. I agree completely with your assesment of his failing, ....but if you'll notice...he assumes you are criticizing to hurt him instead of help. he's doomed to a life of envy and resentment. you're just rubbing it in.

spexx,.....what did you learn?

Aliantha 09-05-2007 01:23 AM

If one were to read a true streaming narrative from jimbo, wouldn't approximately every word be cock?

Edit: I meant every third word but upon reading the statement again I decided it was probably pretty close anyway.

skysidhe 09-05-2007 01:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brianna (Post 381624)
It's nice to see some literary criticism taking place here in the Cellar. Long overdue, I say.


As the guys practice one upmanship the true comedian sleeps.

Or whatever the hell your doing right now.

Cicero 09-07-2007 10:55 AM

Yeah- this "LJ Streaming Narrative" thing has already taken a nose-dive.

Back to the drawing board. Maybe I need to work on "LJ creative-nonfiction prose".

Or maybe I need to actually get some work done. Ummm...yeah. Work.


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