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skysidhe 09-10-2007 08:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HungLikeJesus (Post 384084)
Is that anything like a scratching post?


hehehe nice metaphor. I think I like you sir. ;) a true poet you are

monster 09-10-2007 08:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by skysidhe (Post 384078)
My ditty was about you monster. You probably couldn't tell. I know it sucks.

I'm sorry, dear sky, of course I could tell,
but i'm up to my eyeballs in all kinds of hell,
and I was so flattered
my speech it was battered
given the day I've had, that's prolly just as well.....

skysidhe 09-10-2007 08:24 PM

lol

DanaC 09-11-2007 12:50 AM

Quote:

this is a long fucking post
Yep. Seemed important at the time :P

Sundae 09-11-2007 11:22 AM

The pretty young lady lady who did my nails
Didn't want to take her time
Brrrrrrr went the sander in her hand
Red went the skin on mine

She looked at the offending digit
And made a little soothing sound
Was she admitting she was at fault?
Or trying to heal the wound?

The owner redid my nails in the end
Berating her in Korean
I think her reply to him may have been
"It was like that when I got here!"

I like to think when she went home
And told of her day much later
She resentfully said that she was blamed
For a lady with stigmata

lumberjim 09-11-2007 12:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by skysidhe (Post 384080)
this is a long fucking post

more importantly, it's a long fucking post about lj.

DanaC 09-12-2007 05:43 PM

SG that's awesome!

Elspode 09-16-2007 12:50 AM

Imagine that you are about to sleep alone again
For the fourth night, or the sixth, or the first.
Imagine that the wolves come to tear away at your soul
Each moment that you lie alone in your sheets.

Then imagine that you will never be alone again.

The wolves will still be there, eyes glowing at the fringe of your awareness.

BigV 09-23-2007 01:43 PM

you're coalescing

dream stuff gathering substance
wispy swirls of desire

unseen but perceived
calling to my nerves

compelling me

SamIam 09-24-2007 01:01 PM

Nice one BigV!


Today my car made it 16 miles in
and 16 miles back
to the nearest town
on a whif of gas.
Scents can compel memories
like nothing else -
so they say.
My Toyota remembered the muddy ruts
between here and there, and
drifted home carrying the smell
of autumn's rain.

Flint 09-24-2007 01:19 PM

devoured by starving wolves,
the skeleton still had breath
in it's bare-boned chest

it gasped out, in passing,
a last mistake, a last request,
before collapsing

Razzmatazz13 09-24-2007 01:27 PM

[thinking out loud] I vote we (and by we I mean you guys, I'm not so poetic) all get together and publish "Teh Cellar Book Of Poems"

all proceeds fall directly to the tip jar? :D or fund the cellar GTG...or hire someone else to do IOTD for UT? hmm...the possibilities are endless [/thinking out loud]

Jeboduuza 09-24-2007 05:47 PM

They say you donate to charity
But all you really are supporting is your fat ass and wallet
Cheap ass
American businessman

lumberjim 09-24-2007 05:59 PM

American businessman behind his desk
built his business to be the best
Your dad works for him, gets a check
and you think to judge him, you little prick.

Jeboduuza 09-24-2007 07:07 PM

ok, cock


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