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monster 10-28-2009 10:12 PM

Apostrophe Abuse/neglect
 
So..... my kid's teacher "corrected" a poster I wrote....

I have two questions:

1) Which is correct:

a) Intra-Mural Sports' Teams
b) Intra-Mural Sports Teams
c) Intra-Mural Sport's Teams

It's a title referring to several school teams who play a sport against teams from other schools. The teams are the people doing the fundraising the poster is about, so this appears in the "name" section of the headings.

2) Where is that poster people always link to here about how to use an apostrophe, stupid..... (not the Bob the Angry Flower one -the other one)

Pie 10-28-2009 10:15 PM

I'll take (b) -- but I'm probably wrong. Sigh.

jinx 10-28-2009 10:16 PM

B for me also.

monster 10-28-2009 10:17 PM

my kids picked B too (except Thor -he's asleep)

Cloud 10-28-2009 10:23 PM

as far as I can tell without context, your title merely includes sports and teams as plural nouns; no apostrophe required.

B

monster 10-28-2009 10:26 PM

context:

The Hippie School

Intra-Mural Sport's' Teams

We are raising money for uniforms...blah blah bla'.....

monster 10-28-2009 10:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cloud (Post 604057)
as far as I can tell without context, your title merely includes sports and teams as plural nouns; no apostrophe required.

B

i not entirely sure that sports is not an adjective in this context?

TheDaVinciChode 10-28-2009 10:29 PM

With no prior context, "B" is the correct option.

Don't let this so-called "teacher" direct you to any conclusion, other than the above.

Makes you fear for the child's education, eh?

"A" is never correct.

"C," however, could be, depending on circumstance, and diction.

(Do they all play the same sport, or, multiple sports?)

monster 10-28-2009 10:34 PM

ENOUGH ALREADY! :lol:

I wrote (B)

he corrected to (A)

I may have to kill him.... but he hasn't yet sent Thor to the principal so perhaps i can show leniency.

(multiple sports)

classicman 10-28-2009 10:36 PM

(a) and if it isn't correct, it should be. Pbbbllllt!

ZenGum 10-28-2009 10:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheDaVinciChode (Post 604063)
"A" is never correct.

A could be correct (but isn't). It is a plural possesive - there are several sports and these teams "belong" to them.

C is singular possesive. There is one sport and these teams belong to it.

B is my pick - "sports teams" is a phrasal noun, and doesn't need an apostrophe.

Hang on a tick, I'm in a room full of English teachers, I'll ask one.

TheDaVinciChode 10-28-2009 10:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by monster (Post 604065)
ENOUGH ALREADY! :lol:

I wrote (B)

he corrected to (A)

I may have to kill him.... but he hasn't yet sent Thor to the principal so perhaps i can show leniency.

(multiple sports)

He corrected it, to the only incorrect answer?

:headshake

English is such a butchered language, these days. I fear for it; My beloved, mother-tongue, warped beyond plausible recognition.

Cloud 10-28-2009 10:39 PM

terrific (sarcasm). The teacher doesn't understand grammar. I would ask him to show you his authority for the apostrophe.

monster 10-28-2009 10:44 PM

I am doing... but I wanted a little back-up before I went gung-ho.....

zen, I agree a is possible, but Sports has to be a noun in that sense and i'm not sure it is here.

Think about it, I could also say... The "Academic Teams" when talking about the Spelling Bee and math games people.... would we add an " 's " to Acedemic there?

ZenGum 10-28-2009 10:44 PM

The teachers confirm, no apostrophe is needed. Also, the M in mural should be lower case because it is in the middle of a hyphenated word, not at the beginning of a word.

Also my pronounciation of "adjective" is a bit odd, apparently.

Quote:

Originally Posted by monster (Post 604047)
2) Where is that poster people always link to here about how to use an apostrophe, stupid.

Moi? I'm in Adelaide.


Quote:

Originally Posted by monster (Post 604050)
my kids picked B too (except Thor -he's asleep)

...and so picked ZZzzzzzzz.

jinx 10-28-2009 10:44 PM

It's totally an adjective.

monster 10-28-2009 10:47 PM

or should we be saying Academics in the first place?

or should we change Sports to Sporting.......

Perhaps I need to say Sport not Sports like Americans say Math not Maths?



pehaps it needs to be IM Sport Teams?

monster 10-28-2009 10:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZenGum (Post 604074)
The teachers confirm, no apostrophe is needed. Also, the M in mural should be lower case because it is in the middle of a hyphenated word, not at the beginning of a word..

yeah, it should be -but that's definitely a "When In Rome" thing

Cloud 10-28-2009 10:54 PM

no, I think "sports teams" is either a compond noun or a noun phrase. The proper possessive would be sports teams' something. My Chicago Manual of style says this:

"in compound nouns and noun phrases the final element usually takes the possessive form. [such as:]

student assistants' time cards." Except there's no possessive here, right?

for an opposite reaction (thereby making me wrong) it says:
"the line between a possessive or genitive form and a noun used attributively--as an adjective--is sometimes fuzzy, especially in the plural. . . . Chicago dispenses with the apostrophe only in proper nounts or where there is clearly no possesive meaning:

the women's team (clearly possessive)
a consumer's group

It's a pretty hard grammatical problem, but I really don't think there's any possessive there, so I still think no apostrophe

xoxoxoBruce 10-29-2009 03:10 AM

The teams are not a possession of sports.:headshake

ZenGum 10-29-2009 06:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by monster (Post 604078)
yeah, it should be -but that's definitely a "When In Rome" thing

When in Rome, teach the ignorant yokels to speak English properly.

Spexxvet 10-29-2009 08:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by monster (Post 604047)
...
a) Intra-Mural Sports' Teams
b) Intra-Mural Sports Teams
c) Intra-Mural Sport's Teams

It's a title referring to several school teams who play a sport against teams from other schools. The teams are the people doing the fundraising the poster is about, ...

They are teams fundraising for sports. No possessive.

BTW, if they are playing against other schools, they are interscholastic, not intramural.;)

monster 10-29-2009 09:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spexxvet (Post 604135)
BTW, if they are playing against other schools, they are interscholastic, not intramural.;)


Oh just don't get me started. I really do try not to cause trouble because I manage enough without trying....

Reg 10-29-2009 12:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZenGum (Post 604117)
When in Rome, teach the ignorant yokels to speak English properly.

Speak loudly and slowly while pointing

lumberjim 10-29-2009 12:50 PM

Quote:

4. Skitt’s Law
Expressed as "any post correcting an error in another post will contain at least one error itself" or "the likelihood of an error in a post is directly proportional to the embarrassment it will cause the poster."

TheMercenary 10-29-2009 12:57 PM

I say b) with a variation:

b) Intra-Mural Sport Teams

Cloud 10-29-2009 01:18 PM

dubiously: who says "sport teams"? Maybe if you are only talking about a single sport, but it would then be more common to say baseball teams, or soccer teams.

Clodfobble 10-29-2009 01:31 PM

Teams is a dumb word.

Make it Intramural Athletics.

jinx 10-29-2009 01:39 PM

How about:

School Bake Sale

Flint 10-29-2009 01:48 PM

I'm sure the teacher intended "Intra-Mural Sports' Teams" to mean "the teams of (or belonging to) the intra-mural sports entity."

That only makes sense if there is an "entity" to which the teams belong.

SteveDallas 10-29-2009 02:27 PM

Pardon me whilst I stab myself in the eyeballs with a fork.

monster 10-29-2009 02:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clodfobble (Post 604237)
Teams is a dumb word.

Make it Intramural Athletics.


The intended audience is somewhat dumber than our 5th-graders ;)

monster 10-29-2009 02:33 PM

although...... I do like that better, especially since I changed the wording a little so that won't be as repetitive as it would have been..... thanks :)

skysidhe 10-29-2009 02:54 PM

B is right but I like fobbles idea of side stepping the whole issue.

I'm not too smart but I have made a many a banner.
I would err on the part of discretion and leave the apostrophe off.

Shawnee123 10-29-2009 03:01 PM

I would go with fobble's idea too.

:3eye:

classicman 10-29-2009 03:24 PM

:3eye: HAGGIS :3eye:

skysidhe 10-29-2009 03:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shawnee123 (Post 604285)
I would go with fobble's idea too.

:3eye:

No capital F? ugg yer slipping.

Shawnee123 10-29-2009 03:44 PM

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monster 10-29-2009 04:36 PM

They don't look like they'd slip to me, but might be quite clumsy for side-stepping. ugg indeed :lol:



I did go with fobble ( :eek: :lol:) subject to teacher's "approval" -he admitted he assumed it was possessive.....

I removed the hyphen too, I'll probably get fired for that one ;)

Clodfobble 10-29-2009 06:13 PM

Yeah, they'll take back your whole salary from the last year...

Cloud 10-29-2009 07:00 PM

people do not understand possessives, I've come to understand. a terrible failing of our grammar instruction, although it doesn't seem that hard a concept to me . . .

ZenGum 10-29-2009 07:34 PM

I recently saw ugg boots with dunlop volley soles.

(and steel-cap volleys ... :eyebrow: they're originally tennis shoes!)

connumgen 10-29-2009 09:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by monster (Post 604050)
my kids picked B too (except Thor -he's asleep)

It's a title referring to several school teams who play a sport against teams from other schools. The teams are the people doing the fundraising the poster is about, so this appears in the "name" section of the headings.

skysidhe 10-29-2009 09:31 PM

Monster I found a rule for possessives.

Intra _ Mural Sports Teams is descriptive so there is no apostrophe. You were right.

I know you have changed your banner but I thought this an interesting rule page anyway.

Descriptive Phrases (weird!)

One of the strangest rules in the AP stylebook insists that certain things are not possessives (even though they look like possessives) but are "descriptive."

As such, they do
not deserve apostrophes.

Such as it is, here's the logic behind the rule:
  • students handbook
    • It's a handbook for students, not a handbook belonging to students
  • teachers college, writers guide
    • The same twisted logic applies
Here are other examples from the stylebook. Notice the absence of apostrophes:
  • citizens band radio
  • a Cincinnati Reds infielder
http://www.newsroom101.com/NR_exerci...un_lesson.html

Clodfobble 10-29-2009 10:27 PM

Which also makes it a drivers license and a doctors appointment.

monster 10-29-2009 10:38 PM

thanks sky. it occurred to me this morning that I have a friend who's an editor and could've answered straight away, but it is nice to have an overwhelming concensus.

Cloud 10-29-2009 11:27 PM

newspaper rules do not count

Cicero 10-29-2009 11:41 PM

I'm in school again! I was told by my professor to "watch my use of the semi-colon"; in certain cases.

I have abused my semi-colon privileges already: now it's time to beat the heck out of the colon. :)

Cloud 10-29-2009 11:47 PM

an aggressive enema?

TheMercenary 10-29-2009 11:54 PM

buttsex?

good stuff sky.

ZenGum 10-30-2009 12:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by monster (Post 604394)
thanks sky. it occurred to me this morning that I have a friend who's an editor and could've answered straight away, but it is nice to have an overwhelming concensus.

:eyebrow:

xoxoxoBruce 10-30-2009 12:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shawnee123 (Post 604285)
I would go with fobble's idea too.

:3eye:

Shouldn't that be, I would go with 'fobble's idea too?

Intra-Mural Jocks ;)

ZenGum 10-30-2009 03:55 AM

:lol:

Cellar, Cellar, on the wall*,
who is the analest of them all?

* I acknowledge that this does not make sense. It is a poetic and rhetorical device.

monster 10-30-2009 08:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZenGum (Post 604417)
:eyebrow:

:eek:

classicman 10-30-2009 09:31 AM

ok - Lemme axe this - so's what's the write friggin' answer?

Shawnee123 10-30-2009 09:32 AM

9!

Undertoad 10-30-2009 10:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZenGum (Post 604434)
:Cellar, Cellar, on the wall*,
who is the analest of them all?

You misspelled "analyst".

Sundae 10-30-2009 10:22 AM

I'm in love.

With the whole damn (damned?) lot of you.
Like, OMG!
There's no place like home and all that.
Snaps!

Spexxvet 10-30-2009 10:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shawnee123 (Post 604486)
9!

Ja!

skysidhe 10-30-2009 12:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cloud (Post 604396)
newspaper rules do not count

Sure they do. A headline isn't so much different than a banner.



Quote:

Originally Posted by Undertoad (Post 604500)
You misspelled "analyst".


I think he did it on purpose as did classic purposefully misspelled 'right'.

Quote:

Originally Posted by classicman (Post 604484)
ok - Lemme axe this - so's what's the write friggin' answer?

figgin doesn't count

and neither do user names. Those are sky skidies rules.


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