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kerosene 01-20-2006 10:18 AM

New art - Nudes
 
Hello. It has been a long time since I have been around the cellar. I hope everyone is doing well. I had a job for a while, but now am again self employed as a full time artist. I have some ideas for getting my work some more exposure. I wanted to post a few of my new paintings, since I have been moving in a new direction. I am posting the links since I am not sure how sensitive some of your bosses tend to be about "sexually explicit" images.

Moonlight Bather

Found Something

On Fire

Contemplation

Meditative

If anyone gets a chance will ya look at these and give me some feedback?

blue 01-20-2006 10:57 AM

Nice work.

But none of them give me wood.

kerosene 01-20-2006 11:02 AM

sorry bout that.

wolf 01-20-2006 11:42 AM

Interesting, in a kind of Peter Max meets Anime kind of way ... but still distinctive. I really like the "Moonlight Bather". There's a mystery to it given that her back is toward the viewer and I really like the colors. Which do not, incidentally, go great with my sofa.

Edit to add: I tried very hard to inject some obscure artsy fartsy terms in my above statement, but it didn't go well. I even looked up the proper spelling and usage of crepuscular, but that wasn't quite what I wanted to say about it. I couldn't find a good enough website of fancy words used in critique of art.

kerosene 01-20-2006 11:48 AM

Thanks, Wolf. I appreciate the feedback.

wolf 01-20-2006 11:53 AM

The link to the art from the sugarbead site resolves to this: http://www.sugarbeaddesigns.com/www....eaddesigns.com

Needs fixin'

kerosene 01-20-2006 12:15 PM

Oops. Thanks for letting me know. I will be getting a real art gallery up pretty soon. When I do, I will update my urls.

xoxoxoBruce 01-20-2006 10:28 PM

Cool, Case. 1, 2 and 5 should be safe for work. ;)

kerosene 01-24-2006 02:15 PM

good to know, Bruce. :D

Trilby 01-24-2006 04:39 PM

I LOVE Meditative! Gorgeous! You're so talented! Great stuff!!!
of course, I like them all, but Meditative is my fave.

capnhowdy 01-24-2006 06:46 PM

Great work. Lose the hair and what have you got?

A little more body and a little less hair would make it better for me.

LabRat 01-27-2006 12:05 PM

My favorite is also the last one, Meditative. Neato. Always look forward to seeing your stuff Case!

mrnoodle 01-27-2006 12:29 PM

I'm also a big fan of Meditative. In general (if you are still looking for feedback), I find the ones that don't feature frontal nudity to be the most interesting. Contemplative scares me a little -- the nipples are STARING at me. That might have been what you intended, of course. I was a little threatened by it, frankly. Do women have a different reaction?

wolf 01-27-2006 01:17 PM

I thought they were a little too overt, but I don't feel threatened by them. I am comfortable with my own boobage.

mrnoodle 01-27-2006 02:52 PM

I don't mean threatened in the "my manhood is at risk" sense. I'm just saying they're giving off a different vibe than the woman's face is. The face is clearly serene, but the hair and breasts are what drew my eyes more (yah yah whatever), and they were saying "grrr".

Gromitspapa 01-28-2006 11:00 AM

I liked them all, case. Moonlight Bather especially for the colors, sexy curves, and light in front of her. Contemplation is my favorite for its composition, balance, and pleasing colors. I also liked Meditative for the pose and the way her hair forms a wall. It has a stained glass quality to it.

I think your work is outstanding!

kerosene 01-31-2006 12:58 AM

Thanks guys for all the feedback...it is good to know how everyone reacts. Definitely the staring boobies. Yeah...now that one is creeping me out a bit. But for some reason it is still one of my favorites. Thanks so much for looking at them!

kerosene 01-31-2006 01:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mrnoodle
I'm also a big fan of Meditative. In general (if you are still looking for feedback), I find the ones that don't feature frontal nudity to be the most interesting. Contemplative scares me a little -- the nipples are STARING at me. That might have been what you intended, of course. I was a little threatened by it, frankly. Do women have a different reaction?

I am not sure if women have that same reaction. Honestly, this is the first time I have really got any constructive criticism. It's nice to get ideas on where to improve.

Would it be hard to look at a nude of a man with an obvious erect penis?

Trilby 01-31-2006 08:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by case
I am not sure if women have that same reaction.
Would it be hard to look at a nude of a man with an obvious erect penis?

They don't bother me. As to your second question, No. It wouldn't be hard to look at. I wouldn't put it over my sofa, or anything, but, it certainly wouldn't bother me.

Cyclefrance 01-31-2006 09:26 AM

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Hi Case,

Your series of pictures reminded me quite a lot of the style depicted in the picture below - have you ventured into fairy illustration at all...?:

wolf 01-31-2006 01:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by case
I am not sure if women have that same reaction. Honestly, this is the first time I have really got any constructive criticism. It's nice to get ideas on where to improve.

Would it be hard to look at a nude of a man with an obvious erect penis?

I have a similiar reaction to the boobs staring at me. It's not so much that they are they, but how they are drawn that causes the effect, methinks. The starkness of the illustration is what does it. Oh, and the precision of the circles has something to do with it too.

A lot would depend on how the penis was depicted.

xoxoxoBruce 01-31-2006 05:29 PM

Naughty bits draw the eye. Sometimes too much, so they become a distraction from the whole composition. :yum:

LabRat 02-01-2006 09:34 AM

Maybe if the right one (her left one) were a little more shadowed like that side of her body, it wouldn't stand out so much, and therefor not draw your eyes down quite so much. My eyes went directly to the breasts, then the rest after a second or two. I love the way the color changes in the hair in all of them.

kerosene 02-01-2006 11:48 AM

I suppose in some ways I am looking to force the viewer to acknowledge the breasts, but I couldn't tell you why.

LabRat 02-02-2006 12:55 PM

Well, then you accomplished your goal, which I would think makes you even that much more of a talented artist :)

capnhowdy 02-02-2006 06:11 PM

Definately no shortage of talent here. The more I look, the more I like.

kerosene 02-03-2006 05:59 PM

Yet another (finished today):

Grace

monster 02-04-2006 05:48 PM

Moonlight Bather is my favorite. Very "art nouveau" which is a style I am interested in, whereas the others I find more cartoonish/anime which does nothing for me.

I find the cerise nipples more "cartoony" than the rest of the bodies, which makes me suspect the artist is scared of them/drawing them. It's like when shy girls wear too much make-up.

Not that I know an awful lot about any of it.

kerosene 02-06-2006 03:57 PM

heh, I haven't thought about that...the nipple comment. I wonder...am I afraid of nipples?

Cyclefrance 02-07-2006 02:54 AM

You need to go here Case

kerosene 02-07-2006 08:17 AM

You know, that is funny...I was not breastfed as a child. Hmm....I wonder if that has something to do with it. And I did breastfeed my own child but not for very long (4 months, I think?) Maybe that was more information than anyone wanted.

mrnoodle 02-07-2006 09:32 AM

Re: erect penis

I think that erect phallic symbols in art carry a whole different cart of baggage than breasts. Usually they are deliberately made to be the main point of the piece (har har), to illustrate domination or virility or something. I think you might have stumbled onto my hangup with your (painted) breasts, though. They aren't "masculine", but they have a quality that one doesn't associate with the quiet earth mother fluttery femininity I was kind of expecting.

The new one, with only one breast exposed and that one partially obscured by her hair, is more of what I expected (or was trained by society to expect) to see.

kerosene 02-07-2006 01:20 PM

I see what you mean.

I had not wanted to portray the soft feminine type breasts, though, in some of the other paintings. In some ways, I want to portray what we might consider societally beautiful, but not soft and touchable.

Ah, well. I have been experimenting with landscapes lately, anyway.

Harlan 03-05-2006 06:23 PM

Very nice
 
Very nice work.

kerosene 03-07-2006 07:09 PM

Thank you! :D


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