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yesman065 12-08-2006 09:36 AM

My Nephew's Poem
 
Here is a poem my nephew wrote - He is 10 years old and an amazingly wonderful and thoughtful young man.

rkzenrage 12-08-2006 09:37 AM

?

DanaC 12-08-2006 09:57 AM

I really want to read the poem. Yesman, get the poem posted dammit.

LabRat 12-08-2006 04:23 PM

Kinda short, t'ain't it?

Flint 12-08-2006 04:27 PM

Is this kid, like, a daoist or something?

Clodfobble 12-08-2006 04:43 PM

Psh - my poem's better than that.

Dagney 12-08-2006 05:00 PM

Boy of few words I'd say.

Shawnee123 12-09-2006 11:40 AM

I, for one, am speechless.

lumberjim 12-09-2006 11:44 AM

doesn't even ryhme

Sundae 12-10-2006 06:50 AM

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Originally Posted by lumberjim
doesn't even ryhme

It's blank verse for heaven's sake - it's not supposed to rhyme!

DanaC 12-10-2006 06:56 AM

lol Funny, Sundae, funny.

Shawnee123 12-11-2006 08:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by yesman065
Here is a poem my nephew wrote - He is 10 years old and an amazingly wonderful and thoughtful young man.

What a beautiful poem. I would actually start another paragraph with "amazingly wonderful..." but other than that it is almost perfect in its simplicity and insight.

footfootfoot 12-11-2006 07:41 PM

He's like the John Cage of poetry

Shawnee123 12-11-2006 07:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by footfootfoot
He's like the John Cage of poetry

lol

Mendelsonn's (sp?) Song Without Notes?

footfootfoot 12-12-2006 08:46 PM

Reminds me of a radio station ID I once heard:
You're listening to W blah blah blah--The songs we play may not be your favorites, but they have a lot of the same notes.


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