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freshnesschronic 05-11-2007 04:49 AM

An Original Song
 
Hey guys.
Here is a sappy song I wrote over two years go. It is my first attempt at recording my voice, producing a beat and track, writing a song (wow the lyrics are so cheeeeeesy). I have two more songs I'll post later but this is my first attempt. I am in no means a singer so don't expect decent vocals. Actually don't expect decent anything, I'm very amateur. So just watch/listen and then leave honest remarks. Or flame me. I can take a hit, I'm a producer, not an artist. Thanks! I used Acid Music Studio 5.0 as well to produce this song too, by the way.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e9yZ5H2Qe6o

HungLikeJesus 05-11-2007 10:09 AM

Freshn - I liked it better than I expected. The general tone, beat and feel reminds me of early 70s, kind of Jackson 5 ish (which isn't a negative comment, by any means).

I'll try to listen to it again in the next few days.


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