Until the End of Time
 

I feel so un-forgiven,
But I know,
Jesus is Living,
Deep within my soul,
The Light is Just unknown,
I will not condone,
What I do not understand,
I'm just working out plan,
To make it to heaven,
Like a smoldering flame,
I'm not ashamed,
To speak my heart,
Maybe I'm not so smart
But I will express my art,
And Live my life,
Conciquences of sin,
Bend the realm of pretend,
I just want to love God,
Untill the end...

you finish this poem

No.


:p

I'd really like to see how you end your poems.

I finish my poems with "you finish this poem"...

it could be a lot of fun if you tried///

so I forgive myself
and begin.

Come What May

That's a bit dramatic sundae.. I like drama.. and griff.. I think your right sometimes you have to forgive your self before you can move on....

anyone else wanna give it a try...