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monster 12-05-2011 08:31 PM

Haiku Too
 
ones you wrote.

I wrote this for my swimmer girl who is happy and yet hurting from being back in the water after two weeks off....

A kite without air
Is pretty but meaningless.
Mermaids need water.

daynarankin 12-06-2011 06:24 AM

Beautiful!You have a knack for this.

glatt 12-06-2011 07:28 AM

That's actually pretty good, monster.

Leaves in the forest.
Thank God, they're not on my lawn.
Think I'll have a beer.

I don't really have the knack.

infinite monkey 12-06-2011 07:32 AM

She said "get the knack"
Sharona, so damn pushy
So 1980.

monster 12-06-2011 07:33 AM

Anything about beer works for me! :thumb:

Clodfobble 12-08-2011 02:33 PM

Everyone we know
Vomiting, more vomiting
Upshot: no need to carpool.

glatt 12-08-2011 02:36 PM

You should throw a few carriage returns in there at the end to distance your cooking blog from the image in my head.


Sorry for all the vomiting.

monster 12-08-2011 09:19 PM

An upshot snuck in there and upfucked your haiku about upchucking!

ZenGum 12-09-2011 01:18 AM

How much up would an upfuck chuck, if an upfuck could chuck up?

monster 04-14-2016 08:10 PM

Productivity
Tax returns during chemo
making lemonade

glatt 04-15-2016 07:58 AM

nice

DanaC 04-15-2016 09:18 AM

Doctor's appointment
Returning with medicine
in control again

Gravdigr 04-19-2016 05:46 PM

Politics is bad
Good only for division
Facebook is as bad


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