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Obeone and yoda and Quigon and Anican

Chapter one

Wons opon a time there was a jedi master name’d Yoda.He met a boy name’d Obeone Conobe.
Obeone was not a jedi yet.yoda trane’d Obeone.Then Yoda met a boy name’d Quigon Gyn.
Quigon was not a jedi yet.yoda trane’d Quigon.Then Quigon met a boy name’d Anican.
Anican was not a jedi yet.Obeone trane’d Anican.They all became jedi’s.All of the dide Befor Anican dide he was sadust by the darck side of the fors.


One day Obeone and Anican went flying.Obeone siad careful hey easy.Then Anican was like sorry I forgot you don’t like flying master.

Did Zippy help you with that? :D

Steve, put down the Bombay Sapphire Gin and walk away from the keyboard slowly.

Everbodee nose Quigone cumz b4 Obigone.

....umm.....real ummm.....good, Steve. Good.

hmmmm...I think it sounds familiar.

Thank you . . . . thank you . . . :notworthy

My son (just mildy Star Wars-obsessed... did you notice??) was very proud of the still-unfinished effort and I couldn't resist posting it.