Ibby, you darling boy, I've lots to say about where your story is going but unfortunately I have to go to class which is nowhere near as interesting.
I like it, sweetie, I really like it and I've only read part I and II (not part III and IV yet) BUT I will say this based on the vibe: I KNOW you are horny. Advance the story and/or characters, sweetie, not your erection. ( or, as glorious as that erection would be, I want to know more about Noah, and YOUR-Ibby's- motivations. Sex is easy. What's special about Noah save his cute face - and, we suppose, - huge cock?)
gimme some psych, baby. gimme, gimme!
and then keep going!