Part 1 - Lecture Hall

Trilby · 03-28-2007, 05:48 AM

Ibby, you darling boy, I've lots to say about where your story is going but unfortunately I have to go to class which is nowhere near as interesting.

I like it, sweetie, I really like it and I've only read part I and II (not part III and IV yet) BUT I will say this based on the vibe: I KNOW you are horny. Advance the story and/or characters, sweetie, not your erection. ( or, as glorious as that erection would be, I want to know more about Noah, and YOUR-Ibby's- motivations. Sex is easy. What's special about Noah save his cute face - and, we suppose, - huge cock?)

gimme some psych, baby. gimme, gimme!

and then keep going!

03-28-2007, 05:48 AM	#1
Trilby Slattern of the Swail Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 15,654	Ibby, you darling boy, I've lots to say about where your story is going but unfortunately I have to go to class which is nowhere near as interesting. I like it, sweetie, I really like it and I've only read part I and II (not part III and IV yet) BUT I will say this based on the vibe: I KNOW you are horny. Advance the story and/or characters, sweetie, not your erection. ( or, as glorious as that erection would be, I want to know more about Noah, and YOUR-Ibby's- motivations. Sex is easy. What's special about Noah save his cute face - and, we suppose, - huge cock?) gimme some psych, baby. gimme, gimme! and then keep going! __________________ In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)