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That was, like, way more than two lines Casi. I'm not even sure it related thematically to what Sam put up there.
I think Sam was expecting something more like:
Having reddened the plum blossoms
The sunset attacks
Oaks and pines - chases through their rows.
Saw teeth gleaming in the fading light
woodchips, lunchpail, heading back to the truck
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