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10-21-2010, 11:11 PM
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To shreds, you say?
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That was, like, way more than two lines Casi. I'm not even sure it related thematically to what Sam put up there.
I think Sam was expecting something more like: Having reddened the plum blossoms The sunset attacks Oaks and pines - chases through their rows. Saw teeth gleaming in the fading light woodchips, lunchpail, heading back to the truck
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