Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 13

lumberjim · 11-10-2007, 12:25 AM

you're doing it wrong

monster · 11-10-2007, 12:37 AM

Your schlong's too long,
Ur doing it wrong
Got a snake dong
Ur doing it wrong
Don't use your tongue
Ur doing it wrong
Minute is long
Ur doing it wrong

Sundae · 11-10-2007, 04:44 PM

Lament

When I think of LJ
I lose my mind
My hips gain sway
My seat makes grind
My hot blood pulses
Through my veins
Too bad he's married
To a beauty with brains

lumberjim · 11-10-2007, 08:45 PM

encore!

Sundae · 11-19-2007, 02:00 PM

Mouth Hunger is the Enemy

I have eaten well today
My stomach is quite satisfied
But my mind is turning to the fridge
There's a jar of sour cream inside

Inside the freezer there is bread
And buttery toast would be such bliss
But I do not need the extra fat
Why sabotage my plans like this

It seems unfair when I work hard
I'm trying to be fit and thin
I'm saddled with this hungry mouth
I'm fighting the enemy within

Shawnee123 · 11-19-2007, 02:04 PM

Bravo SG!

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Sundae · 11-21-2007, 04:35 PM

He was singing and playing guitar
Each one louder than the last
She in turn had headphones on
And her Nintendo up full blast
They didn't hear the wolves outside
As they came in, red in tooth and claw
They ate the noisy couple, then
They licked their chops and went next door
Now this pair had no music on
They sat before the fire and read
The wolves had no chance eating them -
They went and ate their kids instead
Don't pollute the world with noise
Beware the deafening machines
You'll miss your chance to 'scape the wolves
And send them upstairs to your teens.

DanaC · 11-21-2007, 05:14 PM

SG those are awesome. That second one in particular.

Andoria · 11-21-2007, 08:20 PM

You woke me up now
I only slept 16 hours
I need some more sleep

DanaC · 11-22-2007, 04:53 AM

*applauds* nice one Andoria!

Andoria · 11-22-2007, 10:26 AM

spontaneously
haiku is far easier
than meter and rhyme

ZenGum · 11-22-2007, 10:38 AM

Nice work Andoria.

There's a haiku thread if you like.

Andoria · 11-23-2007, 11:47 AM

yay! redirecting..

this cellar is big.. like Jung's collective unconcious big..

LJ · 11-23-2007, 12:01 PM

jung like lung and sung and wrung
of course, of course, of course
but jay like say and whey and fey
or why like Pie and sigh and try
dunno, dunno, dunno

freshnesschronic · 12-02-2007, 10:49 PM

Finals appear at the coming dawn
End of the semester not too long
Staying up 'til nite is day
How I hope I receive the A

Cram

11-10-2007, 12:25 AM	#181
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	you're doing it wrong __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

11-10-2007, 12:37 AM	#182
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Your schlong's too long, Ur doing it wrong Got a snake dong Ur doing it wrong Don't use your tongue Ur doing it wrong Minute is long Ur doing it wrong __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

11-10-2007, 04:44 PM	#183
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	Lament When I think of LJ I lose my mind My hips gain sway My seat makes grind My hot blood pulses Through my veins Too bad he's married To a beauty with brains __________________ Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac

11-10-2007, 08:45 PM	#184
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	encore! __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

11-19-2007, 02:00 PM	#185
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	Mouth Hunger is the Enemy I have eaten well today My stomach is quite satisfied But my mind is turning to the fridge There's a jar of sour cream inside Inside the freezer there is bread And buttery toast would be such bliss But I do not need the extra fat Why sabotage my plans like this It seems unfair when I work hard I'm trying to be fit and thin I'm saddled with this hungry mouth I'm fighting the enemy within __________________ Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac

11-19-2007, 02:04 PM	#186
Shawnee123 Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 21,206	Bravo SG! :

11-21-2007, 04:35 PM	#187
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	He was singing and playing guitar Each one louder than the last She in turn had headphones on And her Nintendo up full blast They didn't hear the wolves outside As they came in, red in tooth and claw They ate the noisy couple, then They licked their chops and went next door Now this pair had no music on They sat before the fire and read The wolves had no chance eating them - They went and ate their kids instead Don't pollute the world with noise Beware the deafening machines You'll miss your chance to 'scape the wolves And send them upstairs to your teens. __________________ Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac Last edited by Sundae; 11-21-2007 at 05:14 PM.

11-21-2007, 05:14 PM	#188
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	SG those are awesome. That second one in particular.

11-21-2007, 08:20 PM	#189
Andoria omg no dialtone Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Philadelphia, PA. Posts: 14	You woke me up now I only slept 16 hours I need some more sleep __________________ I play MMOs. I need a signature which is deep, thought provoking, and devours bandwidth with the voracity of rabid weasels. It is also, by nature, vaguely sad with a tinge of my obvious internal, unfathomable loneliness. Like this, , but at 1.3megs packed into 2 by 6 inches. Animated.

11-22-2007, 04:53 AM	#190
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	applauds nice one Andoria!

11-22-2007, 10:26 AM	#191
Andoria omg no dialtone Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Philadelphia, PA. Posts: 14	spontaneously haiku is far easier than meter and rhyme __________________ I play MMOs. I need a signature which is deep, thought provoking, and devours bandwidth with the voracity of rabid weasels. It is also, by nature, vaguely sad with a tinge of my obvious internal, unfathomable loneliness. Like this, , but at 1.3megs packed into 2 by 6 inches. Animated.

11-22-2007, 10:38 AM	#192
ZenGum Doctor Wtf Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Badelaide, Baustralia Posts: 12,861	Nice work Andoria. There's a haiku thread if you like. __________________ Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl.

11-23-2007, 11:47 AM	#193
Andoria omg no dialtone Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Philadelphia, PA. Posts: 14	yay! redirecting.. this cellar is big.. like Jung's collective unconcious big.. __________________ I play MMOs. I need a signature which is deep, thought provoking, and devours bandwidth with the voracity of rabid weasels. It is also, by nature, vaguely sad with a tinge of my obvious internal, unfathomable loneliness. Like this, , but at 1.3megs packed into 2 by 6 inches. Animated.

11-23-2007, 12:01 PM	#194
LJ i am myself Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: via blackberry, maybe Posts: 750	jung like lung and sung and wrung of course, of course, of course but jay like say and whey and fey or why like Pie and sigh and try dunno, dunno, dunno

12-02-2007, 10:49 PM	#195
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	Finals appear at the coming dawn End of the semester not too long Staying up 'til nite is day How I hope I receive the A Cram

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