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Old 03-26-2009, 11:33 AM   #1
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Do you edit Wikipedia much?

I created an account on Wikipedia for the sole purpose of making the following edit. Can you spot the difference?
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Old 03-26-2009, 11:39 AM   #2
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Yes. The comma after "consensus" in the first line of the example.

They are fortunate to have you contributing to the cause.
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Old 03-26-2009, 11:51 AM   #3
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The sentence doesn't make any sense without that comma!

Actually, it changes the meaning to something that doesn't make any sense within the paragraph.
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it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your
expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever
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Old 03-26-2009, 01:57 PM   #4
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How about a semi-colon?
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Old 03-26-2009, 02:04 PM   #5
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Of course, I did seriously consider using a semi-colon; but I opted not to go hog wild on my first-ever Wikipedia edit.

If you want to change it to a semi-colon, I promise not to start an editing war with you.
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it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your
expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever
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Old 03-26-2009, 02:06 PM   #6
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You're a funny man, Flint.
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Old 03-26-2009, 02:06 PM   #7
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Is there a delay on the edit, or does it change straight away? I've never edited a wikipedia page.

I've written a page for my university wiki (Leeds Wiki). Was quite interesting having to present information in that format. You have to organise your thoughts differently.

https://wiki.leeds.ac.uk/index.php/H...torical_debate
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Old 03-26-2009, 02:11 PM   #8
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You can also put the comma after the word "up".

Flint, why won't you do anything the way I would do it?
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Old 03-26-2009, 02:17 PM   #9
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You're a funny man, Flint.
Aw, heck. You know what they say about funny guys...
that they're just masking the bone-crushing angst that they struggle with for every agonizing second of their tortuous, self doubt-riddled existence*.

Ah... yes Dana, the edit took place immediately, however this may be because I specified that it was a "minor" edit.



*they say the same thing about guys who create an account on Wikipedia to add a single comma
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Old 03-26-2009, 02:19 PM   #10
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Edit this Flint! lol

You know what they say about funny guys... that they're just masking the bone-crushing angst that they struggle with for every agonizing second of their tortuous, self doubt-riddled existence.
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Old 03-26-2009, 02:50 PM   #11
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I've edited about 10 pages. Changes always show up immediately.
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Old 03-26-2009, 03:08 PM   #12
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Well, sure. That's because you're Undertoad.
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it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your
expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever
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Old 03-26-2009, 03:12 PM   #13
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Shouldn't it be called Wikipedit instead of Wikipedia? I've never edited anything there, but I'm happy to say I know someone who does.
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Old 03-26-2009, 03:14 PM   #14
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What happens if you edit and it's all just a bunch of BS you made up? Does someone get to gong you or something?
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Old 03-26-2009, 03:23 PM   #15
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What happens if you edit and it's all just a bunch of BS you made up?
The whole world is watching, and it gets corrected almost immediately:
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it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your
expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever
gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio
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