my newest song

staceyv · 02-13-2004, 12:46 AM

( see post in main section "need advice really really bad" if you want to see my inspiration...)

you acted your way into my heart
but you loved someone else at the very start
you talked your way into my dreams
but my trust is gone, all of me, it seems

you wished it was her, held me close in our bed
dreamed of success while she danced in your head.
"everything" for her, but you said "i love you",
not only to her, i was hearing it too.

you didn't love me then, but you love me now,
i'd like to be equal with you somehow,
i loved you so much, but now mine is gone,
i feel it's too late, your kisses feel wrong

now you really love me, so what? i don't care
we shouldn't have married, f**k your excuse of "last year"

"last year" you said you loved me
"last year" you held me close
"last year" i was your girlfriend
"last year" she was getting love notes

you wished it was her in our bed
you wished it was her loving you
now my feelings are dead
f**k you.

(okay, i know it's not radio quality...may need some editing, and it needs a few verses about them meeting for drinks...)

staceyv · 02-13-2004, 12:48 AM

a far cry from the song i wrote about him in the very beginning
http://members.cox.net/zhena/

Griff · 02-13-2004, 06:35 AM

You know, that's not half bad.

Beestie · 02-13-2004, 07:39 AM

atta girl. Stand up for yourself. I like it.

kerosene · 02-13-2004, 09:22 AM

Those lyrics are cutting! Good stuff.

Undertoad · 02-13-2004, 09:34 AM

Keep the lyrics and the anger for the song, even if you reconcile with him.

mrnoodle · 02-14-2004, 02:06 AM

I am willing, without having consulted the band lawyer, to arrange musical intenseness around your not-bad verse - maybe fo' free.
I can do metal, pop, country, whatever my chicken pickn, bony ass hands will come up with. I'm on a Testament-y, Dream Theater -y kick right now. Your strong lyrics need big minor chord progressions and a drummer. Maybe a 3 minute solo with time signature changes midway through.

yah. so anyway, look us up @ gasheadmusic.com. that stuffs kinda metally, and the 2 1/2 cd's we got on the boards right now are harder. However we do a blues/jazz version of a megadeth medly that will make you weep with its purity.

Nah, we just hacks. But you want to correspond w/us just go to the site. This is GasHead. You have no idea how much you're going to like us

staceyv · 02-15-2004, 10:57 AM

thanks, mrnoodle, i was thinking of something heavy, courtney love inspired...i haven't come up with a melody, though. sometimes i just write lyrics and never get around to putting them to music. i'll check out your site.

OnyxCougar · 02-18-2004, 03:33 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by mrnoodle
I'm on a Testament-y, Dream Theater -y kick right now. [/url]

Dream Theater ROCKS!!! Their rendition of "Funeral for a Friend" is nearly better than the original. My husband has been a fan of them for years, and is introducing them to me slowly.

mrnoodle · 02-18-2004, 07:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by OnyxCougar

Dream Theater ROCKS!!! Their rendition of "Funeral for a Friend" is nearly better than the original. My husband has been a fan of them for years, and is introducing them to me slowly.

Funeral for a Friend is the Dream Theater song for people who don't "get" Dream Theater - it's the gateway drug. Your husband is cool.

blue · 02-24-2004, 10:06 AM

OK, I downloaded your mp3 Stacey, and kind of liked it. Do you have anything else recorded?

staceyv · 02-27-2004, 08:04 AM

yes, i do have other songs recorded. i have included two of them on my cellar music exchange cd. they are instrumentals. i have a few songs recorded that i sing on, but i don't really like them enough to share them...one of these days i'll get back into recording, but it's such a pain right now with the stupid software we have that's incompatible with this cheap computer...

02-13-2004, 12:46 AM	#1
staceyv Lecturer Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Ohio Posts: 927	my newest song ( see post in main section "need advice really really bad" if you want to see my inspiration...) you acted your way into my heart but you loved someone else at the very start you talked your way into my dreams but my trust is gone, all of me, it seems you wished it was her, held me close in our bed dreamed of success while she danced in your head. "everything" for her, but you said "i love you", not only to her, i was hearing it too. you didn't love me then, but you love me now, i'd like to be equal with you somehow, i loved you so much, but now mine is gone, i feel it's too late, your kisses feel wrong now you really love me, so what? i don't care we shouldn't have married, fk your excuse of "last year" "last year" you said you loved me "last year" you held me close "last year" i was your girlfriend "last year" she was getting love notes you wished it was her in our bed you wished it was her loving you now my feelings are dead fk you. (okay, i know it's not radio quality...may need some editing, and it needs a few verses about them meeting for drinks...)

02-13-2004, 06:35 AM	#3
Griff still says videotape Join Date: Feb 2001 Posts: 26,813	You know, that's not half bad. __________________ If you would only recognize that life is hard, things would be so much easier for you. - Louis D. Brandeis

02-13-2004, 07:39 AM	#4
Beestie -◊\|≡·∙■·∙≡\|◊- Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Parts unknown. Posts: 4,081	atta girl. Stand up for yourself. I like it. __________________ ♠ ♥ ♣ ♦

02-24-2004, 10:06 AM	#11
blue Operations Operative Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Northern WI Posts: 739	OK, I downloaded your mp3 Stacey, and kind of liked it. Do you have anything else recorded? __________________ If you spot a tornado, always remember to point at it, yell "tornado!", and run like hell.

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02-13-2004, 12:48 AM	#2
staceyv Lecturer Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Ohio Posts: 927	a far cry from the song i wrote about him in the very beginning http://members.cox.net/zhena/

02-13-2004, 09:22 AM	#5
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	Those lyrics are cutting! Good stuff.

02-13-2004, 09:34 AM	#6
Undertoad Radical Centrist Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Cottage of Prussia Posts: 31,423	Keep the lyrics and the anger for the song, even if you reconcile with him.

02-14-2004, 02:06 AM	#7
mrnoodle bent Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: under the weather Posts: 2,656	I am willing, without having consulted the band lawyer, to arrange musical intenseness around your not-bad verse - maybe fo' free. I can do metal, pop, country, whatever my chicken pickn, bony ass hands will come up with. I'm on a Testament-y, Dream Theater -y kick right now. Your strong lyrics need big minor chord progressions and a drummer. Maybe a 3 minute solo with time signature changes midway through. yah. so anyway, look us up @ gasheadmusic.com. that stuffs kinda metally, and the 2 1/2 cd's we got on the boards right now are harder. However we do a blues/jazz version of a megadeth medly that will make you weep with its purity. Nah, we just hacks. But you want to correspond w/us just go to the site. This is GasHead. You have no idea how much you're going to like us

02-15-2004, 10:57 AM	#8
staceyv Lecturer Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Ohio Posts: 927	thanks, mrnoodle, i was thinking of something heavy, courtney love inspired...i haven't come up with a melody, though. sometimes i just write lyrics and never get around to putting them to music. i'll check out your site.

02-27-2004, 08:04 AM	#12
staceyv Lecturer Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Ohio Posts: 927	yes, i do have other songs recorded. i have included two of them on my cellar music exchange cd. they are instrumentals. i have a few songs recorded that i sing on, but i don't really like them enough to share them...one of these days i'll get back into recording, but it's such a pain right now with the stupid software we have that's incompatible with this cheap computer...

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