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Old 01-17-2012, 06:14 AM   #1
DanaC
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A poetry experiment

I was looking through an external hardrive at some old documents and discovered a half-done piece called 'Poetry experiment - Wendel'

Wtf? I don;t remember that....do I?

Read it and did remember writing it. Trouble is I cannot remember anything about the ideas behind it. I know I was doing it stream of consciousness and had a vague story in mind, but the life of me I cannnot recall what it was...

So. Here ya go peeps. Since I don't remember where it was going, I'll throw it open to the other creatives on here. Any ideas on where it should go? Write the rest if you feel inspired. Or a line, or two.

*smiles*

Quote:
Wendel was uneasy with the weekend round the corner,
and the order of decay was lying heavy in his heart.
He left his keys in his coat pocket, slipped the latch back on the door and
skipped a heartbeat as he left his home behind.

Outside sunshine blistered and the birds were all aflutter,
with excitement and divine interpretation.
Breeze gusts blew the treetops in a smattering of lightflash
and the cars whirred past along the tarmaced street.

It was halfway past the midpoint of a lifetime’s hard decisions
and the sweet smell of the flowers barely held appeal at all.
He gave a desultory wave to one who saw him walking by them
and the last time he looked round the clouds were rolling.
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