More songs I wrote, please crit?

Ibby · 06-07-2006, 11:14 AM

You, Robot?

A million small points of light
Flickering in the dark
Dependant on our tiny machines
Electric overload

Sci-fi is fiction no more
Machines, they rule our lives
Computers in charge of all
Our towns are run like hives

Has mankind grown too lazy?
Are people just too weak?
Machines tell us what to do
What to eat, what to think

What once took weeks, a moment
What took a year, an hour
Our lives have sped up too much
Why can’t we mellow out?

Outro solo (Keys? Techno-prog-y vibe, think APP’s I Robot)

06-07-2006, 11:14 AM	#1
Ibby erika Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: "the high up north" Posts: 6,127	More songs I wrote, please crit? You, Robot? A million small points of light Flickering in the dark Dependant on our tiny machines Electric overload Sci-fi is fiction no more Machines, they rule our lives Computers in charge of all Our towns are run like hives Has mankind grown too lazy? Are people just too weak? Machines tell us what to do What to eat, what to think What once took weeks, a moment What took a year, an hour Our lives have sped up too much Why can’t we mellow out? Outro solo (Keys? Techno-prog-y vibe, think APP’s I Robot) __________________ not really back, you didn't see me, i was never here shhhhhh Last edited by Ibby; 06-07-2006 at 11:19 AM.

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