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Old 10-29-2004, 08:06 AM   #1
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Dear Mystic,
if you are trying to express something about the world around you, and you choose to use written words as the medium to express those thoughts, you should show a little more care in your use of those words. You chose the medium, not us. You may have some really worthwhile ideas to express, but your message is being lost in the noise of your poor writing.

I read your original post, and I didn't understand it. I didn't understand it because it didn't make sense.

Lumberjim asked what your first language is. I think he was joking, but I wonder. Your last posts were at 6AM Philadelphia time. Are you in Europe?
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Old 11-04-2004, 12:51 AM   #2
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just sounding the world as it actually is!
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Old 11-04-2004, 12:55 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by glatt
Dear Mystic,
if you are trying to express something about the world around you, and you choose to use written words as the medium to express those thoughts, you should show a little more care in your use of those words. You chose the medium, not us. You may have some really worthwhile ideas to express, but your message is being lost in the noise of your poor writing.

I read your original post, and I didn't understand it. I didn't understand it because it didn't make sense.

Lumberjim asked what your first language is. I think he was joking, but I wonder. Your last posts were at 6AM Philadelphia time. Are you in Europe?
Just sensing out some poetical reasons in this 'out of rythm' world.
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