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01-15-2006, 01:24 PM

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xoxoxoBruce

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Some are dark, most are simple, some are short, and some are off the wall.

That describes all good poetry. Yours is very, very good.
I like them all, but "There She Goes" and especially "Cold and Broken" blow my skirt way up.

PS- I think there's a mistake in the 10th line of "Cold and Broken".

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