Write a Spontaneous Poem

lumberjim · 04-08-2008, 06:37 PM

a trenchcoat smells like rain
puddles splashing silently in my memory
as a child at school i stand in line
the gray day feels like wet heavy pain
we stand in the hallway line so violently
it all just stays the same
rivulets distort, raindrops dot
behind the window pane
eyelids get heavy watching the buses stop
it all melts into evening, night dinner
tv time on the carpet, bed already?
lie awake in the dark until i fade
away into tomorrow and do it again
again
ah gayne

04-08-2008, 06:37 PM	#11
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	a trenchcoat smells like rain puddles splashing silently in my memory as a child at school i stand in line the gray day feels like wet heavy pain we stand in the hallway line so violently it all just stays the same rivulets distort, raindrops dot behind the window pane eyelids get heavy watching the buses stop it all melts into evening, night dinner tv time on the carpet, bed already? lie awake in the dark until i fade away into tomorrow and do it again again ah gayne __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

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