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10-23-2010, 06:02 PM
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10-23-2010, 06:21 PM
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Writer 1 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables Writer 2 7 syllables 7 syllables. |
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10-23-2010, 06:39 PM
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10-23-2010, 06:54 PM
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10-23-2010, 07:08 PM
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10-23-2010, 08:01 PM
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I think it was re-conceived to be words instead of syllables. I am probably wrong, though.
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10-24-2010, 05:46 AM
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10-25-2010, 11:12 AM
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10-25-2010, 11:25 PM
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Phew!
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10-26-2010, 08:44 AM
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To shreds, you say?
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turtle poking out his head ready for a swim
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10-26-2010, 09:27 AM
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Leisurely.... Sudden hurry
...last night's meal, it was curry
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10-26-2010, 10:50 AM
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So, wait...is it two writers or three writers?
In other words, does monster's entry end it, or are we supposed to repeat what foot did with different words (and then THAT ends it)? I'm SOOOO confused. (Pay me no mind, my OCD and need for order and symmetry make me need the most concrete rules possible.) 
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10-26-2010, 11:50 AM
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Leisurely.... Sudden hurry ...last night's meal, it was curry Frog legs with a touch of spice Glinda ate her fill. That frog tasted very nice! Last edited by SamIam; 10-26-2010 at 12:41 PM. |
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10-26-2010, 12:54 PM
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I
think that if you are going to bend the rules of renga you might as well aim for a completely new level in fact, a different structure syllabically defiant.
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10-26-2010, 12:56 PM
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Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya?
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I syllable* on my bed
The pillow: it's wet! I can't hold back the spittle. *pronunciation key: si LAH bull
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