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Old 05-14-2008, 03:25 PM   #16
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I gotta be honest. This three whores at a time story isn't doing it for me.
Before you get all uppity, let me remind you there isn't any "three word" rule here.

My three-whores-at-a-time story consists of me doing one of them from behind while the other one licks that one's asshole, and the other one is licking my balls from underneath. When that asshole is good and loosened up, I'd put it in there, and then proceed to a little ass-to-mouth. It's always best when you can have the mouth right there next to the ass. I might line up two of them next to each other, and then alternate doing them from behind. One of them stays on mouth patrol, of course. Alternately licking an asshole, or my shaft when available. As for the cumshot, I'd have to go back to doing one girl from behind, and having two mouths available for asshole/knob/balls licking. And after I shoot my load, of course they'll have to lick it all up, and then make out, swapping my cum between each other's mouths and letting it drool out over each other's titties, while I slap my wang against the other girl's wet, sticky cheeks and wank on my still-throbbing shaft, occasionally grabbing one of their heads and stuffing it back in their mouth. You know, that girl whose ass I had it in needs to get back here and get a taste of this action. While all three girls are slobbering all over each other's faces, covered in my sloppy load, and grabbing my balls while I jerk off, rubbing my cock inbetween their tongues, I think I would definitely cum again.

...

I gave myself a boner just then.
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Old 05-14-2008, 03:36 PM   #17
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I gotta be honest. This three whores at a time story isn't doing it for me.
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Your first error was assuming that this thread was in any way designed to do anything for you.

Also, King of Clonethreads...do clone threads not mimic the style of the thread they are cloning?

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Old 05-14-2008, 03:37 PM   #18
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Damn
I was going to write mine, but got bogged down in the details of what the three men looked like, where I met them, and what we all said to eachother.

By the time I got to the part where one had his tongue in my ear and I was rubbing another one's hard cock with my face through his jeans I was too excited to continue.

I guess it's all in the foreplay for me!
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Old 05-14-2008, 04:28 PM   #19
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flint, you have a serious porn addiction. I would know because I've seen all those movies, too.

PS--which whore do you write SLUT in permanent marker on her forehead??
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Old 05-15-2008, 06:23 AM   #20
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Seriously....arse to mouth play?

ch'yeah right...Im no prude, but why would I want something in my mouth...thats been in my arse (or someone elses for that matter).

I've seen those movies too, but....no
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Old 05-15-2008, 07:11 AM   #21
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yeah, A2M is disgusting and nothing about sex but all about power. I'd never do it and I'm a trisexual.
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic.

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Old 05-15-2008, 08:40 AM   #22
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It's not really for stimulation so much as it is entertainment. If I just wanted to get off, it would be straight from-behind intercourse.
But then, what am I going to do with those other two girls? They need to earn the title of whore. By taking it anywhere I put it.
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Old 05-15-2008, 09:25 AM   #23
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It's OK Flint, I'm sure Penthouse Forum's decision to stop buying your stuff is only temporary.
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Old 05-15-2008, 11:13 AM   #24
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I think they're just tired of the same old stories: "yeah yeah yeah, buttfuck buttfuck buttfuck, jism jism jism..."

The big trend right now is ear and nose sex. If you can write a Dear Penthouse about having ear and nose sex you'll be right back in the game.
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Old 05-15-2008, 07:52 PM   #25
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hey flint, i found some girrrrrrrrrrrls willing to go with you...
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Old 05-21-2008, 10:36 PM   #26
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OK, let's see if we can rescue this one. I've copied the story so far, up until Flint interrupted with his fantasy. Up until then, it was turning out to be a very nice plot for a children's book. So let's start again...

Once upon a mattress, three whores who were very very, very whorish whored themselves out to whoremongers, who treated them like princess whores until the money ran out. Tired and sore, they ran out the door. Then their gaping sores ran into another obstacle. The
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Old 05-21-2008, 10:36 PM   #27
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Old 05-21-2008, 11:39 PM   #28
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allright, first, I object to the term, "whores." I mean, are these practicing prostitutes, sex workers, courtesans, ecdysiasts, or just girls out to have a good time?

Second, I pity all of you who shun analingus. If you have never had it performed on you, you are missing out on something sublime. I prefer it to cunnilingus. Truly.

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Old 05-22-2008, 07:52 AM   #29
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They are only whores by virtue (get it, virtue) of the word whore being closer to the word, eh, word than say, prostitute.

We all have a place in society.
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Old 05-22-2008, 11:12 AM   #30
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OK, nobody wants to play by the rules. I'm gonna take my whores and go home.
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