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02-21-2013, 05:44 PM
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Voices In My Head
Voices in my head,
They tell me I'm dead, My Brain can't take no more, I am spiritually bankrupt, And morally poor, Sometimes I wander, What it's all for, Then I realize my heart, Has been shown the door, The devil is trying, To steal my soul, But Jesus won't let go, So Now and then I just, Let it flow like cold snow, That is my heart you know, Cold to the core, But sweet as honey, The devil is a joke, Not even really funny, So tell me how do, I make money, The way Godly Men do, How do I live, Like winny the poo, Warm and cuddly, Fresh and new, I guess I just have to, loose the pride, And confide in love, Turn from evil, And reject Bad things, Cling to God, Let my heart sing, Fight for what is right, Live for the day, And sleep at night, I duuno life is fun, and now I'm done. |
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02-22-2013, 11:12 AM
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The Un-Tuckian
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I do what the voices in my head tell me to do.
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02-22-2013, 03:06 PM
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Slattern of the Swail
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I liked the poem, JBK, but I am worried about you, too.
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
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02-22-2013, 03:30 PM
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We have to go back, Kate!
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It's a good poem.
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02-22-2013, 03:54 PM
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Slattern of the Swail
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
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02-22-2013, 03:56 PM
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Person who doesn't update the user title
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I liked it too, and especially the Winnie part.
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02-24-2013, 03:49 PM
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well I think I'll be fine.. I just have to get some spirituality points...
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