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Old 03-27-2012, 03:36 PM   #1
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B'eating A'round the B'ush
Beat'in round the Bush
Beat'in round the Bush
Beat'in round the Bush

Make your lips go shhs
Make your lips go shhs
Make your lips go shhs

I don't have nothing,
Better to do,
That's why I'm picking on you
I'll stop when you go Boohoo


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Old 03-27-2012, 04:03 PM   #2
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What the- I don't even--
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Old 03-27-2012, 05:14 PM   #3
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From time to time, throwing out an unfinished poem for others to continue it is an interesting little experiment/fun thing to do.

But I really would like to see a poem finished. Because that is where the craft of poetry lies.

Finishing a poem is difficult.
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Old 03-27-2012, 06:08 PM   #4
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If I make it back to school the first thing I will do is take a class in reading and math.. hopefully that will expand my horizons to the point where I'm a better writer...
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Old 03-27-2012, 06:29 PM   #5
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Finishing a poem is difficult.
Pretty much you just add the words "The End," just to make it clear. It's not like music where you have to do stuff like establish a sub-dominant-dominant-tonic cadence or anything.
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Old 03-27-2012, 07:25 PM   #6
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Pretty much you just add the words "The End," just to make it clear. It's not like music where you have to do stuff like establish a sub-dominant-dominant-tonic cadence or anything.
You're right it's not like music. But just adding 'the end' does not an ending make.

Personally, I find starting poems very easy. Finishing them can be a bitch.
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Old 03-27-2012, 08:28 PM   #7
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Pretty much you just add the words "The End," ...
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... But just adding 'the end' does not an ending make. ... Finishing them can be a bitch.
The End, Bitch.
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Old 03-27-2012, 08:38 PM   #8
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your use of apostrophes is most perplexing.
my grammar is rotten as flies on dead fish... i don't know how i got through English one and 2..
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Old 03-27-2012, 06:33 PM   #9
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Or you could just write "the nun fainted".
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Old 03-27-2012, 06:35 PM   #10
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That cheered me up. Thanks.
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Old 03-27-2012, 07:39 PM   #11
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some reason this thread title reminds me of cunnilingus
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Old 03-27-2012, 07:58 PM   #12
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Old 03-27-2012, 08:02 PM   #13
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The application of the lingus (tounge) to the cunare (literally, wedge, signifying the vagina).
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Old 03-27-2012, 08:09 PM   #14
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Learn something new every day. I'll never look at the word "cuneiform" the same way again.
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Old 03-27-2012, 08:10 PM   #15
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not at all what i meant..

it was a recycled thought of the after math of the bush administration war in iraq/b'ab'elon.. yes the sexual sensitivity of sadom was rampit but i'm over it..
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