look at my site? need constructive criticism

Gwennie! · 05-12-2005, 03:36 AM

The web site has a good overall look. But, I had the same reaction as jaguar. The page content runs together and needs some borders. If you can edit the CSS you might be able to adjust borders that way.

I don't think the Nav Bar should have any product pictures. That adds to the confusion.

The home page seems a bit heavy. Even over DSL there was noticible page load delay. Smaller pix on the home page is probably a good idea.

Break a leg, gal.

limey · 05-12-2005, 04:44 AM

Light type reversed out of a dark background is nearly illegible - if you really want to do it , make sure it is a large, clear typeface (even for people without poor eyesight).
Take out the product categories where you have no product for now, but put on the front page "Coming soon .... bracelets, rings and more!" or whatever.
Otherwise I like it.
Oh, and I agree with simplify the pricing structure and allow a sort by price feature ....

kerosene · 05-12-2005, 11:24 AM

Thanks folks for all the feedback! I will definitely be working on this to get the look right. I appreciate you all taking the time to look at it.

05-12-2005, 03:36 AM	#1
Gwennie! Not Female at Birth Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Anaheim Posts: 166	The web site has a good overall look. But, I had the same reaction as jaguar. The page content runs together and needs some borders. If you can edit the CSS you might be able to adjust borders that way. I don't think the Nav Bar should have any product pictures. That adds to the confusion. The home page seems a bit heavy. Even over DSL there was noticible page load delay. Smaller pix on the home page is probably a good idea. Break a leg, gal. __________________ Only The Crumbliest Flakiest Gwennie!

05-12-2005, 04:44 AM	#2
limey Encroaching on your decrees Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: An island within the south-west coast of Scotland Posts: 7,016	Light type reversed out of a dark background is nearly illegible - if you really want to do it , make sure it is a large, clear typeface (even for people without poor eyesight). Take out the product categories where you have no product for now, but put on the front page "Coming soon .... bracelets, rings and more!" or whatever. Otherwise I like it. Oh, and I agree with simplify the pricing structure and allow a sort by price feature .... __________________ Living it up on the edge ... of civilisation, within the southwest coast of Last edited by limey; 05-12-2005 at 04:45 AM. Reason: To add further thoughts ....

05-12-2005, 11:24 AM	#3
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	Thanks folks for all the feedback! I will definitely be working on this to get the look right. I appreciate you all taking the time to look at it.

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