Artistic Opinions Needed!!!

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Originally Posted by Radar

That's a much better pencil, but the problem is I'm trying to keep it to 2 colors for printing costs, and if I change the colors, the eraser will look strange. A pen on the other hand looks good any color.

That's why I kept the design to two colors ... the blue and red that were in the original image. It's the graphic that is important, not the color. People grasp the concept of pencil, even when it's not yellow. If it was entirely about printing costs (which should be nil for an online business unless you are intending to go to homeschooling conventions and such) you'd go for one-color plus black, which can as much as halve printing costs.