Short VD poem

[DanaC]

I look at my shirt with the dart sticking through,
and the bird on the bed says, “You got red on you.”

Shaun of the Dead ref?

[HungLikeJesus]

Originally Posted by Sundae Girl

I often try to avoid other people's poetry because I don't know how to politely say, "Yes I know you are proud of it, but it's not very good is it?" and I really hate to lie about things that are important to me.

But this being the internet I figured you wouldn't know I'd peeked at it...

Then it turns out to be good and I'm impressed.
Very clever, round of applause.

Sundae Girl, thanks for the kind words. I hesitated for a long time before posting it, then figured, this being the internet, etc. and no one here knows me. It's difficult to open yourself up to potential criticism, as I'm sure you know, and that's really the first time I've tried poetry (if you can call it that).

Originally Posted by DanaC

Shaun of the Dead ref?

Yes, DanaC - SotD. One of the best of the romzomcom genre, I think.